Hey There,
just got photoshop elements 7 and this is my first go around with a new flyer I’m working on
the blank space will be a picture of larry as well as my logo under the business name
any feed back greatly appreciated
rough me up a little
Scott
I’ve seen worse… Maybe add a photo of some sort. Maybe something that would intrigue your target market.
I would move “best window cleaning service” towards the bottom of the page, maybe above your phone number.
I’d use the wording “Call NOW and we’ll take 50.00 off your next full service cleaning. Offer expires Sep. 30th”
Does every (at least most) houses in your area have screens? If not, people may think they’re not eligible for the discount since they don’t have screens… Around here 1 in 4 houses will have screens, usually.
Your headline seems a little odd. What are you trying to imply with it? I’ve been thinking about using something like “Discover your yard from inside your home” or “Your neighbors will want your shiny windows”. “We can turn your window into your favorite picture frame.”
I would say “Ask about Gutter Cleaning and Debris Hauling”.
Play around with the “styles” for your font. You can add a drop shadow to some of the text which will help make it pop.
These are just my opinion though, others may disagree.
Have fun with photoshop!!
Micah made some good points. When will it go out? I ask because I wouldn’t give them more than 3-4 weeks to take advantage of the offer.
I would take out Best window cleaner. Do you really have to down everyone. Who says your the best? You?
I think the Califorina DMV deemed Larry to be the best WC’er, if I remember correctly.
Best Window Cleaning is the name of Larry’s business, too.
Not crazy about the headline, “Don’t apologize for your clean windows.” Why would a customer ever apologize for their windows being clean?
How about [I]“Don’t apologize for your [U]dirty[/U] windows…and we won’t apologize for leaving them sparkling clean”[/I]
Also, I’ve never been crazy about the $50 Off style of offer. If I call you from the flier will you automatically take the $50 off at the time of quotation, after I remind you of the flier offer or worse, will you inflate the price then take the $50 off? These are my concerns as a consumer.
How about “Book by X date and receive a $50 Off coupon for your next service. You can even pass this coupon on to a friend or loved one.”
I pretty much thought it was great untill I read the different comments.
50 bucks is alot of money, but really its up to you…and I like the offer. Better then offering a percentage lilke CFP always says. Maybe the Heading could be different…even tho I didnt get it, it was interesting. Maybe it could be even better tho. I seen that you didnt put your business name blasted on the top like so many of us do…that was good.
Maybe 20 bucks off for them and 20 bucks off for a friend?
Sorry about that post! More then me get in here with the name Simply Glass. That was kinda rude how he said that. :mad:
Thanks a lot guys for all the awsome feedback… And yes the dmv deems larry the best lol…jk
anyway i added some of your guys ideas as well as figuring out how to work the program a little better
In response to the offer they prob won’t hit the streets for maybe another week or so and because it’s a full service clean were willing to pay that much for new customers. Or thats what im understanding
without out further rantings
Is that a broad in the picture 
Don’t you have any hand on squeegee photos? Or a wfp/trad pic? Not keen on the cartoon.
I often put “DIRTY WINDOWS?” on the top of my marketing stuff. I think it kind of makes people realize how dirty their windows really are. Maybe once its in their head theyve gott get those windows cleaned. Its also straight forward and people realize the service youre offering instantly. $50 is a lot of money. What if the house is really small? Lately Ive been promoting free track cleaning which has been getting us lots of calls.
Actually thats a rare photo of the California crap stirrer
most recent changes i think it’s finally where i want it but i don’t know if the changes are enough to start sending out…more feedback please it’s really helped alot.
i’m also going to edit the first post to show the most recent changes.
I like it Larry!
It’s not me – the hard work is by my boy, Scott.
Well, Scott, did an excellent job!
