I think it looks pretty good. I like simple and too the point. That’s a pretty large first mailing. If I were you. I would push out a smaller run of maybe 1000 devided up into thirds of differant cards and track the results. Then move with the remaining 9000. I think that’s the smartest way of getting the ROI and in the end you have something that you know will get you better results.
This isn’t my first, but will be the largest. I’ve been scoping out target areas and running small test cards. The final result is a cumulation of the results from previous distributions and feedback from my prospects and clients.
If I learned anything from my first year, the money making season is short. Im gonna get’er done this year.