"I can see clearly now the pane is washed"

Hello everyone!

 I am thinking of using this slogan for my future window cleaning company. Do you think it is catchy or cheesy? Please be honest.  :)

It makes me think of that song " I can see clearly now the rain is gone." :o

Id say its tad long… But your on the right track…


Sorry, I think it’s cheesy too! Something a bit shorter would probably be better.