Is this a bit too much? Flyer critique

Marketing
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I would not in a million years use this, I think it is a bit too in your face. It would however get you remembered.

The idea just came to me so I did a quick mock up with fake logo/name.

What do you all think? Does it deserve a punch in the face or a pat on the back? :slight_smile:

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I actually like the concept.

Maybe show 2 pics. One of the dirt splotches and the other (at the bottom of the flyer) showing a window(s) covered in dirt or finger prints, etc.

3

I actually love the white space and the concept. I think it could be even more graphically pleasing, but something tells me that even if it were more graphically intense you wouldn’t see any better results. I’d love to hear how it goes.

4

I think its really cool.

5

I like the concept! Keep us informed on the results.

6

I think i just fisnshed my new flyer. Help me out here???
Paul
http://i134.photobucket.com/albums/q97/showmecleaning/Flyer2009.jpg

7

I was bored/trying to avoid doing work so I spent a few minutes sexing things up a bit for your flyer…

8

Hey Paul, I think it needs a call to action. Some reason for them to call you over other wcers. Something that they directly benefit from.

9

Help me out here Tony. Cleaning the windows they can’t benfit by. My Christmas lights did show up on the picture. I did do a small mail the same as flyer and booked 3 new customer on Christmas Lights. Now you guess what drove them to me???

August has been good to us this year. This week we have 6 res. to do and one is stroms. They pay for them I do them. a little slow because school going back. Man I have not had to do Flyers for so time. Problem really don’t need to now. The way people are talking its going to get slow. We will see??

10

I Like it man but it says to me. I do high rise.

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Paul, many wcers tell the customer they will clean the windows. I tell the customer I am there to save them time and make them safer because they don’t have to get on a ladder. I also offer them some kind of savings if they schedule w/in a certain time frame.

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Ok I see. True got you. Thanks Tony. Really was trying to keep it simple.
Paul

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How about this…:wink: