Courtesy of [FONT=Arial][SIZE=2]Richard Crocker[/SIZE][/FONT]
I was hoping to get some feedback and/or critique on this flyer but so far no replies. If you have any good advice I’d love to hear it.
Thanks!
I’m no marketing guy but I’d change free estimate to free quote. Also you need what Kevin and Paul would call - a call to action. Something that grabs their attention and moves them to call you. Perhaps a photo or graphic of someone falling off a ladder would help.
Yeah, I was concerned about not having a call to action. I’m not going to give discounts so I’m at a loss as to what kind of call to action I can make. I don’t want to let the flyer be dated with a discount that expires in 30 days but maybe it’s something I should consider.
That’s a great idea about a pic of a guy falling off of a ladder. I’ll have to do a Google search for a pic and see if I can fit it into the flyer.
I appreciate the feedback!
How about, “Don’t Delay. Call NOW to miss the spring rush. Get your guaranteed schedule selection Today!”
I’m glad I had Chris post this flyer so you guys could offer great ideas!
I’ve made a few simple changes to the flyer. I moved the line “Let a seasoned professional help in simplifying your life” up to the first paragraph and it looks better and allowed more space for changes suggested in this thread.
More importantly I changed the line “Call 227-0552 today for your Free Estimate”
to
"Don't wait! Beat the Spring rush!
Call 227-0552 today for your FREE PRICE QUOTE"
It may not be the greatest flyer but I think it will bring in some work if I put out enough of them. I have no residential work this week for the first time this Winter. I do have commercial work to do this week but I’ll still have some time to put out flyers. My Brother is free this week and owes me big time so I’ll have him help me get as many flyers out as possible.
Thanks for you guys valuable input!
Needs better looking fonts and a logo if you have one at the bottom right instead of the middle.
I have a company logo but there’s not enough room for it at the bottom of the flyer. My website address is much more important than my logo so I had to go with it instead of the logo. But I’ll be stapling (or paper clipping) my business card to each flyer and it has my company logo so at least they will get to see the logo.
I like the simple easy to read font for a simple flyer. Granted, this flyer is not a masterpiece but I think I now have it tweaked to where it will be effective if I put out enough of them.
I do appreciate your feedback!!! Thanks!
