I like the second one and it would be cool if you could add the house from the first one vs the clocks. Another suggestion you might consider, make your phone number and web address bigger (if possible).
@clevermonkey is on to something… the reason it sounds weird is because grammatically your list is inconsistent. Each point is a noun, but the hard water one is a verb. Change it to “Hard water stain removal” or something similar.
What do you think? IMO, that is much better. I do think the text color is a bit too red and that an orange would look better. For some ideas about orange & blue, go search for a Denver Broncos helmet or just Google “Orange complement blue” and see what images come up. You might try choosing other colors for the text in your image editing program. Play around and see what happens.
Is the red in the text the same color as the red box around your phone number? If they aren’t, I would make them the same. Colors should either be the same or obviously different, not different shades of the same color. That gets confusing to the eye.
Most of the windows here have screens and most of them have to come out from the inside, unless you can flex the screen frame enough to get them out.
Yes, we don’t do pane pricing, so that picture you show would be one window.
For that price:
We brush all windows and window frames for dust and cobwebs.
We brush the screen, if we don’t think it will fall apart…washing is an additional price.
We also wipe down the window frames when detailing…we don’t do “factory new detailing”, just a wipe down.
We scrape paint specks, etc…
Mainly, we clean the exterior and try to stay under 8 minutes per window…for first time cleans this can be hard, as you know. Fiddling with the screens are a huge time-waster.
Does the price sound high to you for what we do?