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Hey Everybody, As soon as Chris changes this back to a bmp. you can have at me. This was my first attempt at marketing my business. I never sent it out because I wasn’t sure it was any good.
Sorry about that … all fixed up!
I would suggest rewording it a bit so that it’s more focused on the the prospect and their needs. The bit about becoming your “friend” might also turn some people off as they are probably looking for reliable professional service 1st and “friendship” second. You are heading the right direction by promoting the smaller friendly company versus the large impersonal corporation, but need to explain a little better why that matters.
Welcome and good luck!
If I saw that letter I would throw it away after the first line.
I agree with Steve-O, Professionalism is #1 and building a relationship is #2 or #3.
Never sent that out. I try to do as much face-to-face marketing as I can. Las Vegas is full of cheats and scandals when it comes to business so I am starting to realize honesty and integrity comes through better face-to-face.
