Hello to all,
I’m new to this forum but have found your posts very entertaining over the past couple of weeks, love all the drama! I’m placing an ad in our weekly publication and wanted to get your feedback. This ad will run for a few months so I want to make sure it’s as powerful as it can be.
I can take criticism so don’t hold back.
James Harper
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where is it at>???
Sorry about that, here you go.
I like it.
The only thing I would change is “everyone is entitled to [B]his[/B] view” to be grammatically correct. Probably Joe customer cares little about that though!
Yes, my wife came up with the slogan and we both thought “Everyone’s entitled to their own view” was a little more inclusive than “his”. Thanks for the feedback though, I appreciate it.
James Harper
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