Here is our first flyer. It’s actually going out as a 4x6 postcard. My wife and I put it together last night. I think we’ll mail them out in April. Feel free to tweak it for your use as long as you don’t live in central ohio. I can email you the full file, just PM me.
I think that your idea to get lots of words in there is great…but I think it lacks a little clarity overall. Not sure how some of this stuff can help the homeowner directly.
Here’s what I mean: This may be a little better…it’s not perfect, but is more ‘customer-focused’
Hope that helps.
Incidentally, I used the same information that you had, and simply restructed it to focus more on benefits. And as far as colors, I used this photo from your website (only one with YOU fairly visible) as a color palette to blend the card with.
Paneless…im impressed with your photoshop skills, in fact my wife was quite impressed, even though she doesn’t use photoshop for my marketing, she uses a combination of QuarkExpress 6.0, Photoshop, and Adobe Illustrator.
Paneless your postcard is very good. Quick question is that the back or the front. If it is the front i might think it wouldnt be very effective due to the fact it is just to much copy. I mean with a postcard you literally get 4 to 5 seconds to attract the homeowners or business owners attention. They do not want to sit down and read a whole bunch of information.
Now if it is the back it would be fine just maybe remove so text and slim the wording up.