Review my Flyer ! Now!

Well this is getting deep… and no where. How well do we know who we are trying to sell to? Everyone says they know, but everyone advertises the same thing.

Are we talking about split testing a sentence in the 3rd paragraph in this ad? Good luck.

I cannot see that sentence in the 3rd paragraph killing the ad, in any country. If that’s all it took the ad was tanking before they reached that.

there is not many perfect ads out there… we only need good enough.

I’m just saying that split-testing is an effective way to find out whether or not you’re on to something…

You never know whats the secret switch.

Time-wise, tho, it’s true, these are details. I’d rather experiment with offers and headlines, to get more bang for my buck.

agreed

First things first … look who’s back ! Welcome back.

I really like Kevin’s version, even when there’s a lot to be read, I’m more inclined to a graphic version with little but strong text.

I don’t have one to show since I’m just trying to understand all this and playing with my own flyers.

I’m going to try both fliers in different neighborhoods and see which one gets the most calls. Going to wait till all these hurricanes pass by first. Thanks Kevin.

Cool. You’re welcome.